Lorenzo @ Glen Innes School: The Beach Poem.

Friday, 14 October 2016

The Beach Poem.

The beach

As waves come in The sand washes Out.

The sea shells role over As the water comes in

And pushes it further Across the surface.

Kids were running and watching the waves as they were screaming and shouting hooray.

1 comments:

Anonymous said...: Kia Ora Lorenzo,

I thought your personified poem was really cool and that you had a couple of good Ideas that maybe I could use. I also thought that your poem about the beach was really interesting. I also made a poem but it was about seaweed. Did you like writing this poem?; 18 October 2016 at 11:25

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