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Saturday 14 May 2016

I'm gone big.

Walht: write an interesting and enjoyable narrative.

Success Criteria
1.Plan
2.Write the words for the introduction
3.Write a powerful introduction.


Huge ,  Tall , Enormous , Buildings , Cars , Trucks , Hotel   ,  Agargo . Terrified


Karl It is time for you to be a big person not a baby. I told you i’m not like you well it's getting late so you should get some sleep for the next day ok wait i’ll just play agargo.
Good night i’m terrified.

Karl wake up you slept in what is the time it's time for you to get up and get changed
Ok can you go outside so I can get changed. What is that is it a lava lamp what karl that
over their oh that it's my project for making stuff big. When are you going to show it to the world i’m not going to show it to the world where then to the school oh why couldn’t
I think of that myself.  Wow was that enormous and tall building their with the cool cars and trucks down there but those hotels are huge

Success Criteria.
  1. Explain the problem.
  2. Use powerful words.

Help ,  what happened ,  Taller ,  Humongous , Oops , Oh no
“When are you going?,,  “soon not now ok let's play with a ball then no I have to get ready Oh then i'll play by myself Karl can you help me get those stuff over their witch one that on the corner the left side oh yep. Oops what happened in their   I have to go out why what going in their nothing don't come in here wait ok bye bye. I’m big and taller than the hotels karl are you outside oh no I got to get away from here before she see’s me.

I’m gone big and humongous Karl where are you Karl . Man I should of kicked that ball outside oh why

Did I have to kick the ball. I'm gone super big and super tall I’ve got to get out of here before she sees me.

3 comments:

Unknown said...

Talofa lava Lorenzo
I think that you have mixed up your sentences but this story is also great. I like how you used oh yep in your story it had made me giggle a little bit. I have also wrote a story about something turning into a giant but it is different compared to yours. How long did it take to write this?

Nice work :)

Unknown said...

HiTane
It took me about 4 days.

Unknown said...

HiTane
It took me about 4 days.

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